welcome-message-60000: improve wording of a sentence. Sometimes less is more.

diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index 10fe5a2..348eef9 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -1,12 +1,14 @@
-userdir-ldap (0.3.74) unstable; urgency=low
+userdir-ldap (0.3.XX) Xnstable; urgency=low
 
   * ud-generate: Make sure we only add people in gid 800 to debian-private.
     (DebianUsers was just a copy of PasswdAttrs.  So use PasswdAttrs in
      all the places that currently use DebianUsers.  Make a filtered list
      DebianDDUsers (accounts in gid 800), and use that for building the
      debian-private subscription list.)
+  * welcome-message-60000: improve wording of a sentence.  Sometimes less
+    is more.
 
- -- Peter Palfrader <weasel@debian.org>  Sun, 25 Oct 2009 16:38:04 +0100
+ -- Peter Palfrader <weasel@debian.org>  Sun, 25 Oct 2009 16:58:08 +0100
 
 userdir-ldap (0.3.73) unstable; urgency=low
 

diff --git a/templates/welcome-message-60000 b/templates/welcome-message-60000
index 43d5f43..dbc377f 100644 (file)
--- a/templates/welcome-message-60000
+++ b/templates/welcome-message-60000
@@ -25,10 +25,11 @@ available on all architectures.  The chroot environments can be
 entered with the 'dchroot' command.
 
 You should use ssh to log into the machines. See the host details on
-db.debian.org already mentioned above for the ssh hostkey fingerprints for the
-servers you access. Our LDAP directory is able to share ssh RSA keys among
-machines, please see <URL:http://db.debian.org/doc-mail.html>. Please be aware
-of the security implications of using RSA authentication and ssh agents.
+db.debian.org for the ssh hostkey fingerprints for the servers you
+access.  Our LDAP directory is able to share ssh RSA keys among
+machines, please see <URL:http://db.debian.org/doc-mail.html>. Please be
+aware of the security implications of using RSA authentication and ssh
+agents.
 
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