welcome-message-60000: improve wording of a sentence. Sometimes less is more.

diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index 10fe5a2..348eef9 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -1,12 +1,14 @@
-userdir-ldap (0.3.74) unstable; urgency=low
+userdir-ldap (0.3.XX) Xnstable; urgency=low

 
   * ud-generate: Make sure we only add people in gid 800 to debian-private.
     (DebianUsers was just a copy of PasswdAttrs.  So use PasswdAttrs in
      all the places that currently use DebianUsers.  Make a filtered list
      DebianDDUsers (accounts in gid 800), and use that for building the
      debian-private subscription list.)
 
   * ud-generate: Make sure we only add people in gid 800 to debian-private.
     (DebianUsers was just a copy of PasswdAttrs.  So use PasswdAttrs in
      all the places that currently use DebianUsers.  Make a filtered list
      DebianDDUsers (accounts in gid 800), and use that for building the
      debian-private subscription list.)

+  * welcome-message-60000: improve wording of a sentence.  Sometimes less
+    is more.

 
 

- -- Peter Palfrader <weasel@debian.org>  Sun, 25 Oct 2009 16:38:04 +0100
+ -- Peter Palfrader <weasel@debian.org>  Sun, 25 Oct 2009 16:58:08 +0100

 
 userdir-ldap (0.3.73) unstable; urgency=low
 
 
 userdir-ldap (0.3.73) unstable; urgency=low
 

diff --git a/templates/welcome-message-60000 b/templates/welcome-message-60000
index 43d5f43..dbc377f 100644 (file)
--- a/templates/welcome-message-60000
+++ b/templates/welcome-message-60000
@@ -25,10 +25,11 @@ available on all architectures.  The chroot environments can be
 entered with the 'dchroot' command.
 
 You should use ssh to log into the machines. See the host details on
 entered with the 'dchroot' command.
 
 You should use ssh to log into the machines. See the host details on

-db.debian.org already mentioned above for the ssh hostkey fingerprints for the
-servers you access. Our LDAP directory is able to share ssh RSA keys among
-machines, please see <URL:http://db.debian.org/doc-mail.html>. Please be aware
-of the security implications of using RSA authentication and ssh agents.
+db.debian.org for the ssh hostkey fingerprints for the servers you
+access.  Our LDAP directory is able to share ssh RSA keys among
+machines, please see <URL:http://db.debian.org/doc-mail.html>. Please be
+aware of the security implications of using RSA authentication and ssh
+agents.

 
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